[Tlhingan-hol] mIl'oD veDDIr SuvwI': 'ay' 2 - yIlop; chaq wa'leS maHegh!

[Robyn Stewart]

On 2012-07-29, at 21:13, Rohan Fenwick - QeS 'utlh <qeslagh at hotmail.com> wrote:

> Moar.

jIlop!

> Warnings will come as appropriate.

nuvpu'vam 'IH DaDeltaHmo', nga'chuqwI'pu'mo' jughuHrupmoH 'e' vItul. (nga'chuqpa' ghun vIpoQbe' jIH; lut nong vItIv neH). Sepvam tIghmey vISovbe'chu'mo', qaSlaH ... Hoch!

> None are yet warranted.

Do'Ha'. 

> 2. yIlop; wa'leS chaq maHegh!

permeylIj vItIvbejtaH. 

> joH puqbe' che'choHmoHlu'

wot cho' Daqelpu''a'?

> net maqDI', joH mangghom la' belqu'moHlu'.

Consider rearranging this so that <la' belqu'moH qech/wanI'> or <joH cho'rupchoHmo' puqbe' belqu'>. belqu'moHmo' indefinite subject, loQ jum, belqu'moHwI' wISovbejmo'. 

> la' ghaH 'avtanDIl'e';

It's the opposite way as I would write it when la' is a known quantity and avtanDIl is the new information. I don't think I have any canon to back me up, but I would use your sentence if we already knew his name and wanted to give his rank, and avtanDIl 'oH la' pong'e' for your thought. 

> mangghom ra'wI''a' puqloD ghaH,

nepotism much this kingdom? :-)

> yoS loHwI' ghaH je. Qup 'ej rol HutlhtaH,

Qupqu'. 

> 'ach 'IHqu' je ghaH'e';

mumerDI' ta' puqbe' parmaqqay qelbe'bogh lut'e', jItuvHa'law' neH. 

> «woch; Sor rur»[6] jatlh 'op, «'IH; maS jul je rur»[7] jatlh 'op, «pup; qut rur» jatlh 'op.

toH. nuvpu' 'IH ghajbej wo'vam. qun neH qel 'ay'meyvam 'e' vIpIHchoH. chaq nuvpu'vam puqloD ghaH mIl'oD veDDIr loD. 

> ghaH luHoHlaw'lI' tIna'tIn 'IH mInDu'Daj 'IH je.

tIna'tIn 'IH, mInDu'Daj 'IH je chev mevwI' Degh 'e' vImaS. 

> tIqDajDaq parmaqDaj So'taH 'avtanDIl.

qatlh? parmaqvetlh tuch'a' vav?  nuch ghaH'a'? rurchuq Hoch loDpu'. 

> 'ach Dach net poQchugh 'ej tIna'tIn leghlaHbe'chugh, 'IQchoH bomtaHvIS 'IwDaj. cheghqa'DI' 'ej tIna'tIn leghqa'DI', tIqDaj lumeQqa'moHlu' 'ej lu'aw'qa'lu'[8].

That one caught me out two when I described three hearts beating in an embrace.  There's more, and more recent canon supporting one Klingon heart. The backfit is that some observers over generalized bIraqlul, and that the heart does have redundant chambers. 

> vupmoH parmaq;

vupmoH'a'? 

> tIqDu' DuQbej 'ej QIHbej. quS'a'Daq puqbe'Daj ba'choHmoHlu' 'ej joH mojmoH 'e' maqDI' tIna'tIn vav, QuchchoH 'ej tulchoH 'avtanDIl; joH puqbe' So'lu'pu'mo' moghpu'.

joH puqbe' So'lu'pu''a'? So' 'Iv?

> DaH jatlh'egh: «naghboch rurchu'bogh qabDaj'e' DaH reH vIleghlaH; chaq vaj qabwIj vIDoqqa'moHlaH 'ej tIqwIj vIvorlaH.»

DoqHa'choHpu''a' qabDaj? 

> qolvat SepDaq Dat maqlu' 'e' ra' qolvat joH'a', jatlhmoH: «joH moj puqbe'wI', tIna'tIn, 'e' vImaq jIH, roStevan. Hoch wovmoHbej ghaH, jul wov rurbej. peghoS Hoch tlhIH, yInaD, yIHo'!»
> 
> tIna'tIn cho'moHmeH

maj, wotvetlh Daqelba'ta'. 

> tay lulopmeH, ghompu' qolvatngan law'qu', 'ej pawtaHqu'mo' nuvpu' law' ghurtaH chuQun ghom. wa''uy' nuv mangghom Dev 'avtanDIl,

law'qu'!

> jul rurtaHvIS qabDaj; chuQun ghomDaq SaH je joH toy'wI' nIvqu', Soghrat, 'ej joHDaq Sum je ghaH.

bong parmaq SovchoHchugh Soghrat 'ej tIna'tInvaD ja'chugh, Mills & Boone DamughlI'. 

> tugh quS'a' qenglu'. lanlu'pu'DI', ghom'a' mer 'ej jachmoH; jatlh: « lo'laHqu' 'oH 'ej Dun! »

wanI'vaD quS'a' chu' chenmoHlaw'pu' po'wI'. 

> chuQun tlheghmey

QamtaHbogh nuvpu' DelmeH <tlheghmey> vIpar. 

> veghtaHvIS tIna'tIn vavDaj je, wovqu' 'ej 'IH tIna'tIn qab. quS'a'Daq puqbe'Daj ba'choHmoH joH. ghopDu'Daj'e' lo'taHvIS, tIna'tIn nachDaq joH mIv'a' lan, tIna'tIn ghopDaq joH ghanjaq lan, tIna'tIn volchaHDaq joH ngup lan.

tay DaDelchu'. 

> wanI' SIQtaHvIS quvchu'taH tIna'tIn 'ej bejchu'taH; jul rurchu'taH. joH chu'vo' HeD roStevan'e' DaH mojpu'bogh 'utlh,[9] HeD je latlhpu'. joH chu' luvuvmeH, quS'a' luvan Hoch. ghIq bey'a' jach ghom'a', 'ej tIna'tIn joH lunaDchu' ghoghmeyDaj law'.

Sughlu'chu'ta'. tay vItIvqu'. 

-Qov

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> [6] SoQ tajvajmey mIwvam vIwaH neH.
> [7] Holy crap SO MANY sun and moon comparisons. (For Avtandil it's a bit over the top, tho' for Tinatin it's poetic. Her name is the only one so far that's meaningful in Georgian - /tinatini/ means "reflection of light". I'm already seriously thinking of changing her Klingon name to {SIla'tIn}.)
> [8] Klingons have two hearts, so plural agreement here for "heart".
> [9] The translation gets away with keeping "king" and "the king" for Rostevan after Tinatin is crowned. But since tIna'tIn is now the joHna', using 'utlh keeps roStevan clear (and TBH I've never seen a more appropriate non-Klingon context for using 'utlh).
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