[Tlhingan-hol] qo''e' tu'bogh pagh - 'ay' vagh

[De'vID jonpIn]

De'vID:
>> SPOCK: ghorqon jInmol'a' wIlajnIS 'ej wInumnIS.  DaH mavangbe'chugh,
>> wo'Daj lupon Suvrupbogh SuvwI'pu'[1].

Qov:
> Suvqangqu'wI'pu'? tuqmey ngo'? choHqangbe'wI'pu'?

Oh, good suggestions.  I think {choHqangbe'wI'pu'} captures "conservative
elements" very well.

De'vID:
>> QI' tuH'a' chavtaHvIS Heghchugh
>> qaq ghu' 'e' lujatlh.[2]

Qov:
> That would be net jatlh.

Why?  The subject is the {choHqangbe'wI'pu'} here.  Is the connection with
the previous sentence not clear enough?

Qov:
> I might go to something incorporating HeghvIS QaQ law' torvIS QaQ puS.

I had considered a variation of that line.  I thought it might be a little
bit too blunt considering that a conservative Klingon says exactly this
later in the movie.  OTOH maybe the Klingon translation should be more
blunt/less subtle than the English dialogue.

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De'vID
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