[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' wa'vatlh wa'maH wa': <tlhIngan maH>

[Josh Badgley]

If it had less bureaucracy, it would lose it's classic Trek feel and begin to resemble Star Trek (2009).

That could be a good or bad thing depending on one's opinion :)

I for one like your style, don't change a thing!


-- jhb


Date: Thu, 22 Dec 2011 00:08:27 -0800
To: tlhingan-hol at kli.org
From: robyn at flyingstart.ca
Subject: [Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' wa'vatlh wa'maH wa': <tlhIngan maH>



Hey, question, just 'cause I'm jealous about all the comments on the
translation posts.


Would this story be more interesting to more people if it were in smaller
pieces and/or included an English translation?  Or just if it had
more fighting and less bureaucracy?


Plus, despite being only three days into 'ay''a' Soch, I'm taking another
posting break, for about a week. vajar et al will return when I do.

---

The General and Captain vajar were discussing the bureaucracy involved in
getting a new ship.


111


tlhIngan maH



Sa'vaD Duq qem lagh. SeHlawDaq lanDI' toqvIr lung QImmey ngaS 'e' legh.
DuqDaq ghop lan Sa' ghIq nujDaq QImmey ghoD. ngechDajDaj ravDaq je pum
puS. bejtaHvIS vajar, qaStaHvIS cha' jarmey Duj Soj QaD neH Soppu' 'e'
tlhoj. buS 'e' nID.


jatlh Sa', “*Dugh* 'ay'mey DIHIj 'e' pIH Qo'noS wo' vergh'a', 'ach Sa'
jIH. Duj naQ vIHIj vIneHchugh DIbvetlh vIghaj. Duj quv tI' tlhIngan wo'
'e' vIchupchugh, lutI'.”


tlhoS tlhuHbe' vajar. qaStaHvIS loSmaH loS DIS tlhIngan QI' toy'ta' 'ej
not DujDajvaD munta' Sa'. 


jatlhtaH Sa', “wo' vItoy'. wo' wIvmey vISIghqu'pa' meq vISovnIS. chaq
tlhIngan wo'vaD De' potlhqu' DaSuqta'chugh, pagh maghwI''a'
Dangu'laHchugh, pagh yejquvvaD Qu' pegh Data'ta'chugh. chaq pegh'a'mo'
pop DaHevbe'pu' ... choyaj'a', vajar HoD?” 


jatlh vajar, “qayaj, qImyal Sa'. choquvmoHneS. wo' vItoy'.” Dunbogh
Qu'mey law' ta'ta'. toy'chu'ta' 'ej tagha' pop Hevrup. Hemqu'choH.
yabDajDaq Sa'vaD Qu'mey le' lIqchoH.


pe'vIl jatlh Sa', “tlhIngan maH!”


ja' Hoch Qoybogh beq, “tlhIngan maH!” jeS je vajar. 


ta'meyDaj potlh perchoHDI' vajar jatlh Sa', “naDev DIqelbe'. tugh
maghomqa'. DaH: ghaytan wo' ngoch DaSov. wo' vergh'a'Daq qaStaHvIS wa'
jar ratlhnISchugh Duj, tI'taHvIS leH vu'laH HoD 'ach luloS latlh beq net
tuch. Duj lajlu'pa' vergh'a' QaynIS.”


jatlh vajar, “bIlugh Sa'. ngochvetlh vISovbej. 'oHmo' motlh wo' vergh'a'
vIlo'be'. matI''egh. Do'Ha' vagh wen Qapbe'choH So'wI'maj 'ej QI' pegh
'oHmo' 'ay' 'ut' jomlu'meH wo' vergh'a' wIghoSnIS. pa' jonwI' chu' vISuq
'ach 'ay' 'ut lungeHbe'taH. beq chu' vIpoQDI' jIloSqu'nIS.” 


jatlh qImyal, “chut DajunmeH, DujwIjDaq beqlIj vIQayqang.” De'wI'Hom much
Sa' 'ej jatlh “naDev yISen. Qaypu'DI' vergh'a' vIjatlh.”


jatlh vajar, “matlh beqwIj. vIQaypa' vIjatlh.”


jatlh qImyal Sa', “wIvlIj 'oHba' HoD. beqlIj matlh DapolmeH latlh mIw
DaSovchugh yIlo'qu'.” QImmey Sopqa' Sa' 'ej DeghwI' ra'choH. rIn qep 'e'
tlhoj vajar. 

---

SKI: General qImyal offers to help Captain vajar navigate the Klingon
Imperial Dockyard policy swamp. 

----

For those of you who have joined the list since I last explained this:
previous episodes of nuq bop bom, plus supplementary materials (e.g.
names, ship layout and an org chart) are posted at

http://nuqbopbom.blogspot.com. I am always happy to correct or
explain anything in the story, be it plot or tlhIngan Hol.


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