[Tlhingan-hol] mIl'oD veDDIr SuvwI': 19. ghob tIvnISbe'lu'

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On 25 November 2015 at 18:19, Rohan Fenwick <qeslagh at hotmail.com> wrote:
> 'o qeylIS lIjlaHbogh pagh, 'o veqlargh je, HIQoychu':

chay' qeylIS, veqlargh je Sov /Middle Georgian/ lut ja'wI'pu' jay'?!

> As always, I welcome questions about the rendition, critique of grammar or
> style, and rotten tomatoes wherever some stupid error deserves them, from
> beginners and po'wI'pu' alike.

I don't know if you're simply following the format of the original
text, but I would recommend for the Klingon text to be broken down
into much smaller paragraphs, for easier reading.

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