[Tlhingan-hol] Vows
Elizabeth Lawrence
elizabeth.lawrence08 at gmail.com
Tue May 27 11:20:54 PDT 2014
I'm working on some Klingon wedding vows, and I'd like a second opinion.
DaHjaj qanay
DaHjaj qaSaw
jIyIntaHvIS bangwI’ SoHtaH
reH qatlhej ‘e’ vI’Ip
reH SoHvaD jISuv ‘e’ vI’Ip
reH juHwIj’e’ juHlIj ‘oH ‘e’ vI’Ip
pIj maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip
reH maQaHchuq ‘e’ ma’Ip
DaHjaj qorDu' chu' wIchenmoH
I'd like to know if there are any general or grammatical errors, but I also
have some more specific questions. I don't like the phrasing of pIj
maHaghmeH jIvum 'e' vI'Ip, but I wanted a sentiment about laughter, and I
couldn't think of anything better, so any suggestions would be appreciated.
Also, I'm not sure I like the mixture of first and second person, but I'm
not sure how to rephrase.
Thanks,
be''elth
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