[Tlhingan-hol] nup bop bom: 'ay' cha'vatlh loSmaH loS: meQtaHbogh qul moQ

[Rohan Fenwick - QeS 'utlh]

ghItlhpu' Qov, jatlh: 
> chalDaq DIngtaHvIS meQqu'taHbogh qul moQ, 

vIjangpu', jIjatlh:
> I could get Sach or tInchoH, but can a qul moQ really DIng? 

mujang Qov, jatlh:
> DIng meQtaHbogh Duj 'ej qul moQ mojpu' Duj.  "While the burning sphere  
> of fire spun in the sky."  Did I not make it clear that it is the ship  
> that is on fire, or do you not like the idea of it spinning and burning  
> both at once?

My first thought was that the ship had blown up completely. jorchu' in the
previous sentence really gave me the impression that there's nothing left
but incandescent gas and a few twisted shards of metal, certainly nothing
coherent enough to still be called a Duj. I thought it was the expanding
sphere of the explosion that you were referring to as the qul moQ.

Qov:
> yaychajmo' jachqu' vagh ghogh. tamtaH Hota'ro'. Qugh 
> luvemmoH 'ach loptaH neH 'e' leghDI' Qongqa' 'e' nID. 

jIH:
> luvemmoH seems to assume that the focus has changed, but then 
> the focus shifts back to Hota'ro'.

Qov: 
> vIta'laHbej. DaH: 
>  
> Qugh luvemmoH jachwI'pu' 'ach loptaH neH 'e' leghDI' Qel, Qongqa' 'e' nID. 

nIv. maj.

> I kept taking the reason why there were six people paying attention to  
> the battle but only five crying out in victory in and out and moving it  
> around. It disrupts the flow wherever it is, but I think it needs  
> saying. 

Agreed.

Qov:
> Duj naQvaD Mahoun parmaq Dotlh chu' maq 'e' Sov Mahoun. 

jIH:
> qatlh qabpaq DotlhDaj neH choHbe'pu'? :P 

Qov:
> qabpaq lupoQbe' Farsajii beq, QumpInvetlh lughajmo'. SovDI' QumpIn,  
> Sov Hoch.

toH, De' Qumbe'chugh QumpIn, Qu'Daj chavbe', qar'a'?

> muQuchmoH wanI'vetlh. Heghpu' HoDchaj 'e' luHar. chaq Heghpu'  
> HungpInchaj je: luSamlaHbe'. lurI'. jang tlhIngan ... 'ej pay' SaH  
> HungpIn, HoD je 'ej pIv HoD 'ej Sawta'! chaHvaD jIQuch.

chaHvaD jIbel je! QaQ ghu' tagha' net tlhojDI' Quchqu'choH vay'.

QeS