[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' vaghmaH Hut: <bom cha'par>

Qov robyn at flyingstart.ca
Thu Oct 20 08:40:31 PDT 2011


I used to forget I was subscribed to this list. I hope no one is 
unsubscribing on account of being bombarded with nuq bop bom 'ay'mey.

At the end of the last 'ay' Mahoun had just used an energy weapon to 
temporarily reduce 'eSSIm's strength, without her knowing.

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HIchmo' qaSlaw' pagh. jIH SenmeH Mahoun ghop Dev 'eSSIm. jIH legh 
Mahoun. "yIloS." jatlh. "pIqaD vIlaDlaHbe'. vISenqangbe'." [21]

ghopDaj 'uchHa' 'eSSIm 'ej De'wI'Hom chu'Ha'. QeH'a'? ghaH retlhDaq 
Qammo' qab leghlaHbe'. nom HIch qatqa'chu'. raSvo' nav Sar nuD 
'eSSIm. wa' wIv. tlhe' 'ej MahounvaD nob. QeHbe'law'. "DujlIjDaq 
bIcheghchugh chaw' 'oH yIja'." mISba'mo' Mahoun Hagh 'eSSIm. jatlh 
"chutmey boHeQmeH nav'e' poQ tlhIngan wo' 'e' DaHarbej'a'? tI QIv 
HoHmeH taSvaD lo'meH mIw Del. Sung tIr Daje' 'e' vISaHbe'. tIr chu' 
ngev jIvwI' 'e' wISeHnIS neH. wej potlh 'ach Sachpa' jInmol chut DIcher."

chaw'qoq tlhap Mahoun. "SuQ'a'?"

mISlaw' 'eSSIm. jatlh, "SuQ taS Delbogh. SuQbe'chugh HoHbe'. 'a SuQbe' nav'e'."

jatlh HoD "'a qatlh chonob?"

jatlh 'eSSIm "bIDaj. bIyoH. bIQIp. naDev Dal yInwIj. qangaghqa'meH qatoj."

chotojnISbe' jatlhbe' Mahoun. 'ach qay' wa' mu'. "bIcheghchugh 
bIjatlh?" jatlh. toy'wI''a' mojmoH neH'a' tlhIngan?

yIvbeH poSmoHwI' ghIrmoHchu' 'eSSIm. tlhoS chabDu' ngaSbe'choH. pup 
chorDaj SomrawDu' tlhargh je. 'eyqu'. bolbe'meH wuSDaj SoqmoH Mahoun. 
jatlh 'eSSIm, "qaHoHbe' ... jIvuS'eghlaHchughghgh."

nom wIvmey chov Mahoun. lajlaH. lajHa'laH. Haw'laH. Haw' neH tIqDaj. 
lajHa'chugh tlhIngan nong mevlaH'a' wa' mu'tlhegh nap? lajchugh puj 
HIchqoq voqlaH'a'? wIv. wIvbe' tIqDaj. Qamqu'. Ho'Du'Daj 'ang. 
vaQqu'choH porgh pe'vIl jangtaHvIS. 'eSSIm laj. wep nav je chagh 'ej 
pa' HeHDaq vo'meH pup. wup. bommeH ghogh 'IH ghaj Mahoun 'ej bom 'e' 
tIv. tlhIngan lurDech rurchu'be' 'ach be' nongmoH ghoghDaj 'e' Sov. 
cha'par bop bom. ghe'naQDaq be'vaD cha'par bom mugh loD. mughbe'ba'. 
be'vaD jatlh neH 'a jatlhlaw'mo' bo'Degh'e' jaqlaH loD. MahounvaD lI' 
Dupvetlh. SIbI' HIvchoH 'eSSIm. DaHjaj pagh chuH. chol 'ej Mahoun 
volchaHDu' 'uchchoH. pa' reDDaq Mahoun yuvmeH QeyHa'choH SomrawDu'Daj 
'ach qaSpa', 'eSSIm yebDu' 'uchchoH Mahoun 'ej tlhe'qu'. 'uchHa' 
'eSSIm ghopDu'. 'eSSIm DeSDu' pepmeH pe'vIl yebDu'Daj luH. 'omqu'ba' 
'eSSIm 'a ngeplaHbe'. poSqu'choH mInDu'Daj pa' reDDaq yebDu'Daj 
yuvtaHvIS Mahoun. HoS naQ ra'law'mo' be' tlhuHqu' 'ach SeHlaH Mahoun. 
latlh bom tlhegh bom. "jatlh cha'par loDvetlh yIvoq." yel Hol mu'mey mughbe'.

noghqu' 'eSSIm 'ej loQ leSpu'mo' Mahoun, nargh. DoH 'a HIvrupqa'law'.
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SKI: Klingon foreplay with a yelwIyyIt touch.
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[21] It may seem obvious now, but when I was writing I got really 
stuck here for a bit, not quite sure how to get where I was going. I 
went out for a run and rethought the whole story from 'eSSIm's 
perspective, following her motivations. It all fit quite well, and 
then I knew how to get where we were going. You don't care about 
that, but I just wanted to assure you that I have all my characters' 
motivations in mind, and that I'm getting out of the house now and again.

Also, <jIH yISen> is my universe's equivalent of signing on the 
dotted line. It will show up again.

If you have an inclination to catch up on missed episodes, it's 
better to do it at http://nuqbopbom.blogspot.com and not via the 
mailing list. There are fewer typos there. I'm re-reading from the 
beginning and the typos are discouraging. But maybe I'm getting better. :-)




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