[Tlhingan-hol] nuq bop bom: 'ay' SochmaH wa': <burghDaq Qot mang>

Robyn Stewart robyn at flyingstart.ca
Wed Nov 2 07:38:56 PDT 2011


This chapter's violence includes impalement, implied head stomping, 
and disruptor fire.

 From yesterday, vajar's injuries are making it hard to fight with a 
blade, and indications are that Hota'ro' and ghutar are already down.

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lulqu'be'choHpu'mo' tamchoH meH. ghumtaH De'wI'. jachbe'choHpu' jagh 
rIQ. tlhovtaH vay''e' leghlaHbe'bogh  HoD. vaytaH'a' Hota'ro'? 'etlh 
yantaHvIS HoD ghutar ghogh Qoy. "HIHub!" jatlh. chaq QaQ. chaq 
qabqu'.[36] QaQchugh, Hota'ro'vaD jatlh ghutar, vaj SuvlaHtaH ghutar, 
Hota'ro' je, 'ej jagh HoHmeH yeqtaH. qabqu'chugh vajarvaD jatlh 
ghutar, lujlI'mo'. Hub'eghmeH SuvnISmo' HoD, ghutar QaHlaHbe'.

QumwI' lel jagh pIv 'ej 'oHvaD mu'mey jach, HubtaHvIS latlh Qambogh 
jagh. ghutar Hota'ro' je lurgh bejchoH HoD. pa' yIn'a' jagh? Hota'ro' 
leghbe'. ravDaq nogh cha' jagh. jochbe'law'. chaH jojDaq Qot ghutar. 
nISwI' pepmeH cha' ghopDu' Soy' lo' ghutar. tochDu'Daj jojDaq nISwI' 
'uch 'ej chu'wI' Senlaw'. po'be' 'ach Qap. QumwI' lo'bogh jaghDaq Qeq 
'ej bach. pum. reghbogh jaghDaq bach. pum. rechqu' HoD. Dat lommey 
'Iw je lutu'lu'. meH ngoHta'chugh Hut puqpu' maw', meHvam rur. nuH 
'ugh chagh HoD ghIq joD 'ej pu'HIch woH. joDtaHvIS SeHlaw bIng 
leghlaH. ravDaq, qabDajDaq, QottaH Hota'ro'. loQ nogh. DubDaj jeq tajHey.

"ghutar," jatlh vajar. "Heghpu' Hoch jagh 'e' yI'ol. Hota'ro' vIboQ."

Hota'ro' retlhDaq torchoH vajar. tlhuHbej 'ach chuS. volchaH bIng jeq 
'uj bID 'abbogh ret'aq. regh Dub 'ej regh je latlh 'oy'mey ram. rav 
SumDaq cha' tlho'ren muq 'Iw Doq 'e' noH HoD. law'law' 'ach SuvwI' 
pIvvaD 'Iqbe'. "Hota'ro', bIjatlhlaH'a'?" jatlh.

"HIcha," jatlh Hota'ro', tlhuptaHvIS. "DupwIch DuHpu ... choyacha?"[14]

"qayaj," jatlh HoD, "vISov. yIvIHQo'. yIjatlhQo'. pIboQlI'."

chol ghutar. DaSpu'meyDaj nguvmoH 'Iw SuD. "Heghbejpu' Hoch jagh," 
jatlh. "batlh Suv Hota'ro'. tuqDaj quvmoHbej. cha' jagh jey, ghopDu' 
neH lo'taHvIS."

ret'aq cha' HoD. jatlh "nuHvetlh Daleghpu''a'? nuq 'ab?"

jatlh ghutar "tIq. tlhopDaj jeqbe'chugh mumer. DuQpu'DI' DuQpu'bogh 
jagh HoHmeH pIp ghorlaw', ghIq pum."

jatlh HoD, "qatlh <HIHub> bIjatlh? DuHublaHbe'ba'pu'."

jatlh ghutar, "Sov'a' jagh? vImISmoH vIneH. mubejtaHvIS DaHIv 'e' vIpIH."

jatlh HoD, "ghutar lagh, bachchu'mo' nISwI'lIj jIyIn. tlhoS nuHwIj 
vI'uchlaHbe'pu'. "

jatlh ghutar, "taj vIteq DaneH'a'?"
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SKI: ghutar's damaged hands can hold a weapon after all.
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[36] I'm a little worried that this sounds too weak, more "help me" 
than "cover me." I'm looking for something closer to the latter, 
without going to "jIvangtaHvIS HIHub."
[14] I'm sure it's obvious that this isn't typos, but just in case: 
this isn't a series of typos. Hota'ro' isn't feeling up to making all 
those sounds right now. You'll have to forgive her. She has a knife 
through one lung.




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